Thursday, April 30, 2009

Pen to Paper.

Wow, it's awfully quiet out there... Are you all deep in revisions or on deadline? How's the writing going? Anyone writing the first draft of a new story, like me? :)

I love the shiny new ones, but man, they can be frustrating as hell. Case in point: I'm typing along, knowing exactly where I want to go with my heroine, when ten pages in... BAM!... I'm suddenly staring at a blank page.

Now, the stupid thing? I'd already envisioned what the next scene would be! I could see it play out in my head as clearly as if I were experiencing it, but for the life of me I could not describe it on the computer. And I'm embarrassed to say I'd stared at the blank screen for far too long.

So today, after staring at the bright screen a little longer, I decided to pull out one of my journals and finish the chapter by writing it in longhand. And it worked immediately.

Why do you think that is? The connection between pen and paper? My fingertips gliding over the pages? The physical act of writing out every word? Or perhaps just the change from staring at a blank screen to grasping a pen and knowing what I needed to write? Maybe it's a combination of all of that.

And you know what else? Not until I'd opened my journal today did I remember that I'd completed the first draft of my first novel, a western, by longhand. And I'd finished it so much more quickly than any other manuscript since.

Now I know why...

Because when I write longhand, I don't edit my work to death; however, I will cross something out and move on quickly or add something else in the margins. When I type out a story, though, I edit as I go and delete what I don't like, which means I sit in front of the computer way too long as I try to compose The. Perfect. Sentence. Not good for a first draft -- at least not for me (I say this because I know down the line some scenes will be deleted anyway, so why should I perfect them during the first draft? You guys probably don't have this problem... LOL). Of course, I want a clean draft. Who doesn't? But there's going to be revisions to give the story POP, right? And yet, that doesn't stop me from over-editing the first draft when I should just write it.

Okay, so what have I learned today? Write! Dang it.

Sigh.

What's going on with you guys? You're all being so quiet! :)

Oh, and have you ever written a story in longhand? Feel free to chime in with the "Are you crazy?! How can you write a 400-page novel by longhand?!" comments. I'm sure a lot of you are thinking it. ;)

Take Care,

Michele

4 comments:

Jen Lyon said...

Hi Michele! It's been quiet all over lately. I'm working on a first draft right now (as you know since I begged you for your help!).

I only brainstorm with pen and paper, but I don't write scenes or an entire book. But that's partly because I'm faster on the computer and my arthritis makes longhand painful after a while.

I hear you on editing to death instead of moving on! I try to think STORY editing only at first. I leaver the grammar and word choice for a little later.

Staring at a blank computer is bad? Sheesh, I spend WAY too much time doing that OR surfing on the Internet.

Michele said...

Hey Jen! Yeah, I've noticed most of the blogs have been fairly quiet lately... everyone's writing! :)

And I'm looking forward to reading your pages--just saw the attachment in my inbox.

I've tried and tried to think STORY only for the first draft and I'll do that for maybe a chapter, but then somehow I slip into detailed editing mode. Every. Single. Time. Grrrr.

BUT, at least I know if I write in longhand that won't happen.

Also, staring at a blank screen will definitely lead to checking e-mail every 2 minutes and surfing the Internet. Absolutely. I have no willpower! I mean, there could be a funny e-mail from you or one of my other hilarious friends! And I'd have to laugh then answer, like, right away!

No Willpower Cwiertny, that's me.

Barbara Martin said...

My drafts are often written in longhand, in pencil for easier correction when the wrong word pops up. I tend to write in blocks that are not in order, but as they come to me. This time round I have a partial outline done in chart form so I have an idea where the story is headed. The first manuscript I wrote was in pieces that had to be put together with new scene transitions to fit.

Michele said...

Hi Barbara! I've also written out of order and then either moved the scenes around or have written new scenes as transitions to fit...and I've done that when writing in longhand or by typing the first draft out on the computer.

I'm so happy to see I'm not the only one who writes in longhand! :)

I have a sneaking suspicion your longhand drafts are probably a lot cleaner than mine, though. LOL

Hope you're doing well!